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December 29, 2012
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So I've decided to go through and correct a lot of the stuff I'm dissatisfied with in Where Words Fail, because I have nothing else to do, creatively speaking. (All for the better, really - I should stop dedicating so much of my time to gaming.) This is mostly story-tightening stuff, but (assuming I can do it) there will be new content to go along with the revisions, presented as bonus chapters.

However, I'm not really the best at catching my own mistakes. A lot of the stuff I'm currently dissatisfied with could have been avoided if I'd had a beta reader...and here's where you guys come in.

I'm looking for somebody who is willing to beta read the revised version of Where Words Fail; somebody who will provide feedback and help me build a better story. I don't know what I'll be able to do to compensate whoever signs up, but I'm sure we can figure something out. If you're interested, leave me a comment here, or send me a note.

And if you don't want to beta read, but you still have noteworthy issues that I should address, you can still let me know. Every little bit of feedback helps.

Thanks, guys, you're the best.

- TEi
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:iconsilverstar83:
I wouldn't mind helping you. I loved reading it the first time, and would love seeing what you have in mind for revisions.
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:icontei-has-pants:
Sure thing! I'll send you a note with what I'll need from you.
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:iconqueen-of-sneaks:
~Queen-of-Sneaks Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'd love to help, if you need it.
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:icontei-has-pants:
Sure thing! I haven't actually started yet, but when I have, I'll start forwarding the chapters to you via note. I'll have to get your email address too, but we can worry about that later.
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